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i fell asleep today
your picture in my hand
wishing to be in your heart
but ive been banned.

i dreemed of the image
taking a physical form
like we used to be
embracing 'till morn.

so let us flash back
to times gone past
take the photos
make them last
lets play games
under the darkroom table
capture the moment
create a fable

then the phone rang
and i awakoe
in my delerium
i thoguht you spoke

but it wasnt for me
you were paper in my fingertips
the smiles sodden with tearstains
poison laughter on the lips

so let me flash back
to minuits before
holding my photo
from months ago
lets swallow the pills
under the sheets
embracing the dream
forever asleep
©2006-2009 *natakukikori
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i wrote this earlyer.
the magority of the poem actually happened. the bits that have a slightly diferent rythem (''so lets flash back...'') are the thought bits.
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Another one good for a song =)

Only one advice - don't use " . " at the end, it is not necessary =)

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"I'd just be the catcher in the rye and all. I know it's crazy, but that's the only thing I'd really like to be."
J.D.Salinger
"Wypalić się do końca, do spodu, żeby śmierci,nic nie zostawić w spadku."
awww wow!! :D
that's really great!!
i loved reading it, every moment. :)

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cAr@
I'll never smile again because your not here <3
thank you very much your your comment and the fave, cheered me up :)

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~*without death there are no true heros, without loss there is no true love*~
no prbs :)

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cAr@
I'll never smile again because your not here <3

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